这个英文句子翻译得有语法错误吗？

1.Someone with clues please call the police.

改为：Whoever has clues can call the police.

= Anyone who has clues can call the police.

2. please take your raincoat with yourself when leaving.

改为：Please take your raincoat with you when leaving.

way i must leave my cantry?

If you have any clues, pls call the police.
pls take your raincoat with you when you leave

Anyone with clues please calls the police.第一句anyone或者someone用单数，但是用前者更顺。
Please take the raincoat with you when leaving.原句有点繁赘，删改了一下。